Feel my carpet is soft and my walls feel kinda nice. Running down the old wooden corridor a floorboard squeaked underneath my pounding feet. The material on this site can not be reproduced, distributed, transmitted, cached or otherwise used, except with prior written permission of Multiply. (He is messy.) On the left hand side is a bunk bed which has Jacksons (my little brother) bed at the bottom and my bed at the top with really messy covers. Ano ang mga kasabihan sa sa aking kababata? My books are bright and colourful so they stand out, all of them are different colours. Now I am going to move on to my senses. They are rather a good set and they cost a lot of money. The best bit about our carpet is it is always warm from under floor heating. My bedroom is in the south end of the hose and it faces southwest. The colour and brightness are perfect in mostly every way possible. Maybe because it has two duvets on it and the sun is shining on it. Honestly, its like DCs villain Two-Face; the fact on whether its tidy or messy is based of luck, like the flip of a coin. This is the first year ive had my own room, and I love having it. Feed-forward - You didn't put as much detail as you should've and there was a few spelling mistakes, you need to put a bit more detail and go over it to make sure you haven't got any spelling mistakes. My bedroom is a forest, heaps of clothes scattered on the floor is the Your spelling was pretty good. Needs work on the punctuation. It is facing the East, which means that in the morning you can see the sunrise from my window. There is a big black shoebox beside my bed which fits all my shoes in it. My double bed stands out and my desk makes some things easier to do. The entranceway to my room holds a flowery scene: crocheted poppies and daffodils blu-tacked to their places, accompanying a daisy-shaped doorbell. I enjoyed reading your writing illustrates without hesitation what your room feels and looks like. Logan I like how you tell the truth but your spelling needs work and maybe thinking about what your trying to say. In the future I would love to have my own room so I can design it the way I want it to be. So let's explore the den people called my room. You have some great ideas and I can get a really good visualisation of your room. Jakes Bedroom How long will the footprints on the moon last? MY BEDROOM The view of my room is amazing because when I look out of my window I see my whole farm I can see our cows I can see our cowshed and the sun rise. The polaroid camera doesn't have anywhere else to go so it just sits on my desk. I have two soft pillows filled with feathers and two cotton filled ones. I love the way you have proven that your room is one of your favourite places. Next time you could have more ideas because the paragraphs were a little short. My favorite things in my room are the pink wallpaper, the cool view outside my window because there are lots of cool trees and my bed's really comfortable because it has a soft mattress, there is also a cool windowsill that you can sit on and look at those beautiful trees. It's good that he loves his room and his own space. In total I have 9 hats that make my room stand out and the brands on many are monster energy, Billabong e.t.c. My room could be a bit neater though! My room was and old garage and now it is a room that has an olden day look, but still feels like a modern room. Well in my room I don't have that much furniture but I am going to tell you what I do have. You walk into my room and pop! All of the furniture is pretty old for example the punk bed is about five years old and the dresser is about eight but its still in good condition. Above my bed there are another three picture that my mum had embroidered for us when we were little. My wall color is a nice light sea blue color I wouldn't change anything about it. There are also some capital letters that are in the wrong place. So in conclusion my bedroom is the best in the house because it soft, layout just for me the colors just right and last of all it's the only place in the whole house where I can get some alone time and not be nagged! I like the way you've used a lot of punctuation in your writing with full stops used correctly, spacing after a comma and capital letters after full stops. One the style two how clean it is three my senses and finally my furniture. Looking at the wall-mounted shelves next to my bed you can see my reading lamp, my phone charger and a few books. It was a great story. Next to my bed is a deyou miterfire. Try next time to make some of your objects more descriptive and not just the colours. I think that you could work on adding a few more descriptive words. Metaphor for a messy room crossword clue. What Type Of Muzzleloading Firearm Is The Most Popular And Most Commonly Used Among Hunters Today?, Be good to keep the clothes off the floor! In my personal opinion I do love the way my bedroom looks and how it has a theme and a great view! To call your home a dump is to say that its a complete mess! Is your bedroom like mine dirty and smelly. One time I bounced a ping pong ball over my bed and landed then bounced off the floor and landed in the cup it was insane. Like maybe a gigantic , SHE HULK!, or maybe not but I love my room with all those fancy accessories. My room doesnt smell like anything except when ive sprayed on some perfume. You spelt it as color (the American way). 3+. A few things to fix up but over all it was good. Clothes stuffed half in and half hanging out of the draws. You used good description and your story was interesting. SHADYNS BEDROOM TROYS BEDROOM I love my bed to bits (literally my cats rip it to pieces) The cleanliness of my bedroom is pretty good, but sometimes my football gear is left outside my wardrobe on the floor. Really good, some really good descriptive words and I could imagine it really well. I stroll into my room and the bright colours instantly pop out. The laws don't apply to my imagination except for the time to clean your room law. Next to that rug is my bean bag which is blue with a flame on it which is also blue. Im proud to call the bedroom mine but im going to change it sometime in the future. It is very plain with no rugs on it. I really liked that you had some really awesome words in your writing that really hooked me in and made it more intresting to keep on reading along. But one thing that you could work on with your punctuation is how much you used. I dont like having my room messy but no-one wants to clean their room right? One of the skateboards is a cruiser board (a small skateboard you cruise around on) I won at a competition, handmade by a local skateboard maker in Raglan. I could clearly see your room just by the way you described it. Although this also gets used by my sister who also Next your eyes will settle upon my short and skinny box shelf that is as black as the night with draws both as blue as the sea and as green as the algae the resides in it. There is also a small book case under the window it is red, green and blue Ive had it since I was little. My room is not too empty but its not too full either. laptop cables are Get your answers by asking now. Once you eyes have shifted again you will see my big, pure white chest of draws in the right hand corner of the room pressed firmly against both the right hand wall and the wall with the window in front of you. On one side is a three section wardrobe with most of my craft supplies in it. Your vocab was well done and I was able to visualize. This is where I do my homework. Other than for sleeping I use my bedroom to do my homework (at my desk), catch up with all the goss on social media and of course as a space to be alone for a little while. My bedroom is the second largest bedroom in my house, and in this description writing I will describe to you about my bedroom by my accessories, layout/space, color and furniture so here we go. Accessories, accessories are big in my room because I picked them personally and they were given to me as gifts but they are apart of my favorite things. This was very well edited so there is not to much to say you have done a very good job with very little mistakes. Colors are a big part in my bedroom because the colors describe who I am and what my personality is like because I am a person who prefers darker colors. But there are disadvantages to having a small room. Kaias Bedroom I have a double bed,white covers and matching pillows to my starry bed which is navy blue and white spots sprinkled all over It. I think you needed to proof red over it because there is a fair amount of grammar mistakes but otherwise good. If I got to change my room I wouldnt change it because I think my room is the best for me and I like it just the way it is. Then you see the messiness, then you see carpet in my bedroom with its light creamy colour which subtly catches your eye. You had a lot of good ideas. My carpet is quite old and has some stains on it from the previous, but most of my bed covers those stains.Some of my clothes are squashed up in my small drawers and most of good clothes are in my wardrobe. As you walk into my room, the first things that you will see is my bed. On the board there is flowers carved on them. My bed is the main accessory in my room because it is in the center of the room up against my feature wall. Separating my sister and I is a large divider, that holds all of my adored books and other well-used items. and at night when it's extremely cold I turn on my speedy heating friend my electric blanket and snuggle right down into my black and white duvet and my purple fluffy sheets. it has a touch of my personality, and stays clean most of the time. You did'n't go into detail about your furniture we don't know what patterns or colours they are. On my bed I have, to be precise three cushions and two pillows that are all multi coloured. At first I was a little surprised of the state of my bedroom, my wall decorations all still hanging up all except for one little photo. So firstly senses smell, sight and feel so when you walk into my bedroom Im not going to lie It smells kinda bad but that's what my parents say It's not bad for me I don't smell anything. It is a king single and it has a wooden front and back board. Now for all of the accessories in my room. It has a very spacious drawer that pulls out from underneath. Good description Bree. I cant find much bad things about your description writing. My bedroom isn't that big so storage isn't easy for all of the clutter I have. It has all the colours and designs that I love. Decorations fill the room with topics, happiness, colours and hobbies. Mine is to the right of the door and facing it, whereas Sams is directly in front of the door facing towards it too. I think you need to work on use of commas and apostrophes, some of them are not needed. Theres room to improve. I am fond of the fact that it is my own place, and that everything is just right. My big white, tall bookshelf is next to the window. It is my favourite part of my house because I can do what I like in there, and yet not get disturbed. Definitely need to work on your vocabulary and sentences as it seems to be repetitive. I like my room the way it is because I love the view and how it is laid out. This final piece of text will be explaining the lighting. And the last of my accessories is the bulletin board. This is the end of my description but in the future I would like to either add some more stuff in there which I have been dying to have for ages or have it in a different room. When I get up in the morning to go to school, or after a big sleep-in, my toes touch the soft dark carpet. Another metaphor that could be used is, " The bedroom is so messy, it looks like a war zone." My bedroom is bright like the sun. What is walking dictionary a simile or a metaphor? What is a metaphor for a metaphor? A metaphor for a metaphor?! A1: there isn't such thing it is just called a metaphor. A2: Alfred Jarry called it a pataphor I get a feeling you're into sports and really like cosy spaces. It feels warm in the morning because of the natural light that comes streaming in and in the afternoon it feels cold caused by the sun moving to the other side of the house. Finally, you look a little bit to the right and see a closet, that's where I would love to have a little seating area with a seat and a lamp so could my little private area. My room has many accessories, there is pictures, paintings, plants and other things too. I have four dark grey walls, and on the furthest wall there is my double bed. I also have a desk and chair next to my big window. Very well written. The cleanliness of my room is not good at all. Great detail in your paragraphs Jessie. All of this talking about my room reminded me of something, I need to clean it or Ill get banned from the Xbox. In my room you would hear gunshots roaring from my TV. I have a built in wardrobe that has shelves in it where I can store my belongings. My accessories are very colourful, my pens and pencils are all kinds of colours. The simplest way to make a metaphor is to use this pattern: First noun + to be verb + a/an + second noun She is an angel. They also allow a lot of sunshine to come in, no matter what the season. Even though my room hasnt got much in it, my room is the tidiest bedroom there. Under both of those beds there are fold out trundlers made for if i want more people in my room so in total i can have a staggering four people in my room! There is also a tall boy and an inbuilt wardrobe where I keep all of my shirts for school. , It is a great description and edited well. 3rd paragraph "one of them are a full size katana" should be Now you should have a pretty good idea of what my bedroom looks like. Im proud to call it mine. For me and my sisters to fit in our room the room has to be laid out a specific way, but it is pretty comfy. Really good writing, I can picture your room very clearly. But when you're the oldest the youngest gets your room when you move out and it usually the best room in the house. There's pillows and rugs lying among my room, worn out posters and books stuffed in my wardrobe. 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